You are to write in no less than 120 words about t...

You are to write in no less than 120 words about the title "On the Youth Crime". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below: (1)近年来我国青少年犯罪率不断上升。 (2)青少年犯罪增多的原因。 (3)你的看法。

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正确答案:Title: On the Youth Crime In recent years there has been an alarming rise in the youth crime. Many school-age children most common in the 14- to 15-year-old age group commit wrongdoings from petty theft to more violent and dangerous crimes. There are three main reasons for the increase of juvenile delinquency. The first is that today children are often exposed to violence on TV which makes them believe that violence is a good way to solve problems. Another reason is that parents are too busy with their work and therefore they have little time to spend with their children and to help them when they are helplessly in trouble. Besides unhappy marriage is also responsible for youth crimes. The break-up of family makes children feel ashamed insulted and disappointed with their lives. Some go so far as to become juvenile delinquents. We must take immediate measures to improve the situation for children are the hope and future of the country. In my opinion the whole society should work together to create a favorable environment for the growth of children. Meanwhile children can be involved in more community services so that they could get a better understanding of society and develop a positive outlook of the world. We should always remember: Prevention is better than cure.
作者围绕提纲中的要点,描述了青少年犯罪的状况,并分析了造成这种现象的原因。文章的结尾段作者不仅表达了自己对这一问题的看法——要迅速采取措施解决这个问题,还进一步提出解决问题的具体方案。文章的结尾段中,作者恰当地引用谚语,画龙点睛地总结了个人的观点。众所周知,谚语、俗语、名言警句是人生智慧的高度浓缩。表达精炼,但却蕴含着深刻的哲理。在写作中,恰当地引用谚语、俗语、名言有助于高度凝练地表达全文的中心,或个人观点。
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