When composing acknowledgements, you should be car...
When composing acknowledgements, you should be careful about whose help should be acknowledged and in what order. Careful thought also needs to be given to language use and style. Read the following Acknowledgements extracts. Judge whether they were well written and suggest improvements. 1) I would like to thank various people for their contribution to this project; N. Leary and R. Lemans for their valuable technical support on this project; John L. Wilson and Q. K. Ahmad for their help in collecting the data and all the technicians who helped me in handling the instruments. I also would like to thank Dr. Richard, my research project supervisor for his professional guidance and valuable support. 2) I wish to express my gratitude to Dr. Stevens, Dr. Smith and Professor Clemon for their extraordinary support in this thesis process. 3) I would like to offer my great appreciation to my colleagues for their wonderful collaboration. You supported me greatly and were always willing to help me. 4) Thank you Jane for the huge hangover that opened my eyes on the research topic. 5) I want to give special thanks to my mother. She has been hilarious taking me out sometimes to give me a fresh look at things and speed up my learning progress.